The Swamp Monster Returns

ROOOOOOOAAAAAAAR!!! Went the monster  as Jack was laying in Jill’s arm dying because the dreadful clown has torn through jack's body and jack soul was in the beast’s hand and help was the last thing Jill heard from jack so Jill stands tall and…

LI: To Plan a Narrative

I learnt that when your hook starts off with a onomatopoeia your story will sound interesting and people would like to read your book.I learnt it because when we were practicing the sentences that started with the onomatopoeia it sounded way better than the other sentences we weren't aloud to use onomatopoeia they just sounded like a plain sentence.